Message to my muse: I will never forget you.
When I saw you first, clothed, masked in persona,
Twitch through mind, in my body a silent roar,
Wicked glint in my eye, face of some fauna.
Primal instincts screamed: reach out, take her.
Journeying hand in hand, mind, body, soul intertwine
Translate to modern parlance: girl thy being be fine.
Tie you hand, foot, heart; myself being the twine,
Pour you out and partake as a glass of fine wine.
Twin flames in darkness, holding bay the night,
Singular thoughts two-pronged; dual wings in flight,
Bodies in rhythm, manifesting an effulgent light:
We are jagged jigsaw pieces; together made right.
Soon we will be alone.
Dear dearest, you are apple of my core,
Ally, friend, confidant, I could ask no more,
A partner like you, who would have me grow?
And a cutie and a half, a little one though.
Under the stars we did once sit.
Though long nights we did not meet,
And a dozen friends we did not greet;
Yet here we are, here we breathe.
Distant bass beats of a farewell drum,
But still…. why look so glum?
Take life’s strand in hand and strum,
For another verse is ever to come.
And when the song and dance is over,
Will we worry about how we played the over?
Wish we ran the race a little slower?
Peeked a couple times over our shoulder?
Here be Ignorance… ‘tis our four-leaf clover.
Epilogue
Footloose, wanderer, peripatetic gypsy man,
Forever walking, where willst make thy stand?
Stretching forever, yet infinitely short it is,
What comes next?
Life is such a tease.
Simply artistic.
Kinda floated a bit tho. It needs a reread
This is an amazing work of art
I really appreciate that judgement. Thank you Cindy!
Haha, I can understand why.
Maybe the note I’ve added may help.
Thanks David!!
I like the flow
Thank you, CK!
Lovely and heart wrenching
Thank you, Mel
Good work
This is not only superb but also uniquely structured in the sense that it describes a story from encountering someone to departure.
It’s a lovely piece. I love it!
Keep it up!
Thank you Clint!
Your words mean so much to me.
Woow. AJ, this is amazing. I was hooked till the end. Didn’t know you are such a wonderful poet.
Keep up brother.
I appreciate it, Brandon.
Best of luck on Optimus!!!
Beautiful work
Thank you, Liliann!
The poem is quite alluring.
Beautiful thought process Advait!
I am grateful for your heartening review, Mellanie. Thank you!
This is true authenticity……..Creativity in all aspects. Excellent piece of art which speaks to one’s soul easily..
Your words are all every artist wants to hear. Much appreciated Grace.
I love the imagery you make with you words soo much!!
What a great comment from a fellow poet. I appreciate it, Kiv.
This is so beautiful. Such an exquisite piece.
Thank you Chebet!